DestroyedPencil's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Unfinished Shadow Game]

Nice!

Loved the movement of the character, the effects on the lights and the sound effects too. Nice work!

[Pancho Adventures]

Not bad

I liked this game because it was a nice and simple to follow as the scoring system worked well. You could create more types of ships especially at the end of each wave. Nice work!

[Flashtronaut]

OK.

This game is OK. It has already been done before but this one is a bit different. If you create another one, try to make a few power ups, such as, a shield to protect you against the craters for a few seconds and a gun to shoot the craters.

[KH: Coliseum of Oblivion4]

It was alright.

It was alright. I liked how you could play as Riku in this one and all his attacks were pretty good. It was also good how you could play a little bit of Sora again. When it was on the "60 minutes" scene, and it kept flashing, I was a bit confused but all the rest was pretty good. I hope Kingdom Hearts Castle of Oblivion part 5 is good.

[Platformer Tutorial]

It was great!

Wow! It was really helpful. I had a little bit of trouble trying to get the character to move. It was a bit hard. He fell under the 'ground' part and I am trying to fix it. Also when i clicked Right. The character was standing but moving left or right but not running.

I haven't completed it yet but have saved my work so far. Hope you create more cause I could really use the help. I am still trying to figure out the problem with mine but, other than that, everything else that I did worked perfectly. Nice Work and hope to your next tutorial.

chunkycheese12 responds:

Thanks, if you need help just PM me.

[FFVII: The Lost Episodes]

Great Game!

Nice work with making this game. The story line was great and the fighting was awesome. I can't wait for you to make another one of these. I like how you could verse, Sephiroth, The Doom Train and those guys that were on the train. Grreat work, I really like, how you could click the Attack, Cure and Doom Train with the random number changing.

I think this game was awesome. The graphics were good, the audio was great and the story line was waesome! Great job on making it!

[KH: Sora vs Riku]

Its OK.

This game is OK. Therer are a few problems with it.

1. You can't win (I did read the author's comment).
2. You can run off the screen and I was always running off it and on.
3. Riku changes his form, or clothes when you do some of the attcks.
4. You couldn't run up and Down it ( but I didn't really mind).

On the positive side, I really liked all the attacks you could do with Sora and Riku. The sound effects were pretty good and background music was pretty good. If you could try fix the four things I mentioned before, then that would make the game a whole lot better.

[KH: Coliseum of Oblivion3]

Nice Game!

Hi AhrimanProductions,

Once again, I love the new game you have made. Nice work on making ie and I really liked the Drive Button so you can turn into Valor Form and attack him. Great work on the game and it continues on from the last episodes you made. Once again, great stoey line and I also can't wait for next game you make that continues on this game.

I will give you a 8/10 and a 3/5 for me. Can't wait for the next game you make and I hope it comes soon, but don't rush it otherwise you will create many massive mistakes. Good Luck!

[KH: Coliseum of Oblivion2]

Like the Game!

Hi AhrimanProductions,

I like this game because it now has buttons to push (Attack and Magic). It has made a pretty good story line because sometimes people can't really think of one. Great game you made and I hope to see the next one! I really like how you get to go to the other worlds because then your not just stuck in the same place all the time.

I give you a 8/10 and also a 4/5. Great work and I hope you continue to make more of them.

[KH: Coliseum of Oblivion1]

Nice!

Hey AhrimanProductions,

Great Work with the game you made here. Believe it or not, but I had made a game that is close to that before I even knew that you made this one. Nice work on the game, it was pretty good but the story was OK, I guess and the battle was pretty good.

Try working on some of the attacks but that one that was in the game was still pretty good. All the graphics were pretty good and everything eles was really good. Great work!

I just have one question, and that is, how did you make the preloader? I have been trying to make one but it won't work for me.

Great Flash game!

AhrimanProductions responds:

Thanks a heap for your positive review!
I promise there will be much better episodes to come.
The 2nd part is nearly done & it is much better than this one.
I'm doing the real KH thing where you get spells & even drive forms as you go along. I know it sucks only having the one attack but that's all I've got at the moment.
In part 2 you can Cure, so that means you can lose. I can't make it so that you can lose because you can't heal if ya know what I mean.
I'll PM you with preloader info.